Planning Storyboard for my Gushers commercial

First Scene- 

During this scene, I will be introducing the audience to the park. This is the one setting where my commercial will take place, and I will film an establishing shot to avoid any confusion as to where this is. The scene will also be dark and plain, to show that the park is empty, uneventful, and boring. This is important to know before my product is introduced.

Second Scene-

This scene will be focusing on one specific part of the park, the swing set, instead of the entirety of it. I want the audience to have one main focus, the girl on the swing set, so that they don't miss any details. The girl on the swing set, which will be the main actress, will match her surroundings in plain, everyday attire. Once again, this is important to show emphasis on the colorful Gushers gummies.

Third Scene-

My third scene will start off with a close up shot of the girl's face in order to show a shift in her mood, as she see's something in the distance. I will show the audience a climbing tree, and more importantly, the flower on the tree. This will obviously attract the girl's attention, and she will begin to make her way over to the tree to retrieve the "flower"

Fourth Scene-

This scene will be where my product is first introduced. After the girl climbs the tree, she will appear as if she is reaching for the flower. However, she will pick the flower, and move it out of the way to get... the pack of Gushers!

Fifth Scene-

Once the girl climbs down from the tree, I will film a close-up of her biting the Gushers. Of course, I will emphasize the sugar gel inside of the gummy, since that is also emphasized in the original Gushers commercial. Once she bites the gummy, she will be transported into a world of color, dancing, and happiness. This will go to show what effect the gushers have on the girl.

Sixth Scene-

I will do stop-motion pictures to show the gummies getting into the product box, and then I will close the box and speak about the product details, and where you can purchase it.

Each scene will last around 5 seconds, and I will have two different songs playing in the background: One for the "gloomy park" and another for the "colorful Gushers world".